5.26 Editing Activity
1.Because Grace is a vegetarian she must pay attentionto the amount of protein in the foods she eats.That's why she eats a lot of beans and she also eats eggs.
2.When Grace first became a vegetarian,she missed eating meat since she had always liked the food she eats.However,she eats a lot of beans,she also eats eggs.
3.When Grace first became a vegetarian,she missed eating meat since she always liked taste of it.However,now she can't imagine eating meat,because she has grown to appreciate the pure taste of meatless cuisine.Meat tastes very strange to her.She is happy to be a vegetarian.
4.Although sometimes it is very difficult to eat out in restaurants due to the limited meatless choices on menus,that is chancing now with the increase in vegetarian restaurants.
5.Grace is opposed to killing of animals.That's why,not only she is a vegetarian but she is also disturbed by the use of animal fur for clothing.
6.She feels better now ,because she doesn't eat meat anymore.In additioan,she feels more humane and she feels healtier.
7.Being a vegetarian and feeling that she is doing her share to protect animals,Grace becomes irritated when people question her motives for being a vegetarian.Although she tries to be patient with such people and she tries to make them understand the value of saving animals ,often people just don't understand.
10.9 Editing Activity
1.Because she is on a good diet Sandra is always healthy.
2.The commn cold can make you feel very miserable ;therefore,you should stay at home in bed.
3.Although I've been maintaining a very healthy diet,I'm sick.
4.She is in very good shape,because she exercises regularly.
5.With excellent nutrition,a generous supply of vitamins,a lot of rest and a plent of exercise you will be healthy.
6.Not only is medicine but taking care of yourself is also important when you are sick.
7.The relationship between body and mind is very interesting.
8.Many doctors charge very expensive rates.For example my doctor does so.
9.The magazine that I read is about how to increase lifespan through better health.
10.The sun shines my window.That's why I have my plants in the window box.
11.I heard about an accupunture clinic and it also has a specialist on herbal medicine.
Paralellism Exercises
1.What great shape she is in,and how healthy she looks.
2.The doctor wanted to find out why Linda was underweight and he also wanted to kow about her blood sugar level.
3.Following a regular program of exercise is more beneficial for me than being on a fad diet.
4.What I like best about my fitness center are the modern Lifecyle machines and beautiful Olympic size swimming pool.
5.How healthy and athletic Jim is.
6.Due to his son's persistence and his willingness to lose 10 pounds,Frank decided to join a fitness center.
7.When Richards realized that his eating habits were the cause of his illness,he began to plan his meals more conscientiously and carefully.
8.Julian decided to try a homeopathic teatment he also changed his diet.
9.Shari really enjoys ocean kayaking and going hiking in the desert.
10.This is a combinations of vitamins that build up the immune system and prevent infection from spreading.
